Adventures of the Big Four by Elijah Kay - Series, Comedy - Four high school freshman outcasts struggle to survive socially. In this episode, the four try to, humorously, cover up accidently giving lead posioning to a popular student 21 pages - doc, format

Elijah, you need to download a script-writing program.  Trelby, Celtx are FREE programs which format everything for you and lots of people use them.  I also think Movie Magic is free, but I might be mistaken.

Right now, the formatting and spacing of everything is all over the place because you write in a doc. and not with a screenwriting program.

It's also really confusing.  You wrote at the start "ACT 1" which is the correct format for a TV show.  But then you wrote "END TEASER" at the end of the scene?  Even though you stated at the start it was the start of the first act.

Change the "Act 1" you have at the start to: "Teaser".

In TV, every time you move onto a new act it's a new page.

So when you're done with the Teaser, ACT 1 should begin at the top of a new page.

Also, you CAP characters names randomly.  CAP the name when they're being introduced, and that's it.  Then right it normally.

-- Curt