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Don
Posted: June 26th, 2016, 8:45pm Report to Moderator
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L. O. D. by Ballard Ingram - Series - L.O.D is the reality behind the airline industry as a flight attendant with stories from a former flight attendant that describes the industry far from glamorous. An Language of Destination flight attendant travels the world, sometimes to third world countries were armed guards escort you to a hotel. This series will explore the dark side of the industry, and explore the world they leave behind, a sacrifice most people forget. 51 pages - pdf, format


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Really need to tighten up the log line


My Scripts can all be seen here:

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I've read the log line several times now and I still have no idea what this is about. Needs some work, that's for sure.


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If I could have adjusted my Log Line, I would have changed it to:

A drama focused on five Language of Destination Flight Attendants struggling to keep their jobs after facing personal and professional challenges.

I don't know if that is better or worse, but it's more overall what the show would be about. I appreciate all of the feedback and if anyone has any feedback regarding the script, you are welcome to message me.
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