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Don
Posted: February 9th, 2004, 11:05pm
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The Hard Sell by Matt Chapman - Short, Teen Comedy - A door to door salesman makes a killing... - html** format.
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Grey Raven
Posted: February 10th, 2004, 12:11am
It was very good, but I'm still confused over who Jerry killed.
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MattC
Posted: February 10th, 2004, 3:58pm
Cheers for the feedback Grey Raven.
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Heretic
Posted: February 11th, 2004, 11:55pm
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Well I thought it was quite good..just a suggestion, maybe a little more dialogue/character building before the sex and violence?
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clever_name
Posted: February 14th, 2004, 11:33pm
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I agree with Chris. You could more reason as to why she wants her husband dead. But overall I rather enjoyed it.
Jesus Christ Timmy! Do not float above me while I'm dying in the abyss!
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TheParadoxicalShaman
Posted: February 16th, 2004, 7:01pm
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He wanted to talk, I wanted to shoot...
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quite agreeable to my tastes
He wanted to talk. I wanted to shoot.
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chism
Posted: February 17th, 2004, 12:49am
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This script is great. I loved it. I couldn't find a single thing wrong with it even if I were looking. The perfect blend of action, crafty dialouge and even comedy. Keep them coming. I like the fact that you don't find out why she wants to kill her husband, I think it should be something left unsaid. Those fans who want to find out can maybe figure it out themselves. If you want my advice, and I'm sure you don't, leave this script the way it is. Don't change a single thing.
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TigerStyle817
Posted: March 21st, 2004, 8:06pm
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Awesome script. If someone says it sucks then they are jealous.
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