When the World Ends by Matt C - Short, Thriller - St. Michael's State Hospital is pourly understaffed and underfunded. Then one day something really weird happens, a man shows up with a tarantuala living inside his stomach. This is the first script I ever wrote and I wrote it back in 2000. If it's a little shabby or there are facts wrong email me and let me know because I hate doing any research - html** format.

First things first, that huge dialogue bit has to go. I mean security guards don't talk that much let alone a character that appears in 1 scene

Nobody really has a description in here

Dr Connors turns back from what he does doing.

What's up with the above line?

It is a good idea though, it just seems to me incomplete; almost like it could've and wanted to be a full length feature

And how does this signify the end of the world, maybe the end of humanity but not the world

This script was intended to be much longer than it was and there were three parts planned, but it gave off too much of a terminator or matrix vibe so i cut it. When the world ends is called that because that was my favourite song when I finished the shorter version you read. Originally it was going to be called st michaels but i though that was pretty gay.

They were spiders right? How about Humanity Bites 

Well, the security dude's mad long speech was kinda odd, given his absolute disappearance after.  I think it needs a bit more buildup.  But I liked the idea.

-Chris