Thanks for the read, BryMo.

This is one of my many favorite pieces in tone and mood. Story- wise, I'm trying to fix now. lol.

Many people had the same problem as you had with the ending. It was my fault since I tried to wrap it all up at the end. My mistake. Hopefully people get it more in the feature, which is coming along. I'm close to finishing my first act, pretty far away though. But I'm not trying to rush things through. Trying to think things more out and fleshing out characters.