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Don
Posted: December 5th, 2012, 11:36am Report to Moderator
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Shout out to Michel.  

The film has been shown in five festivals thus far and is also in the official selection of the Bronx Film Festival - USA in December.  Perhaps Janet and Phil and give is a report.

Pro Kopf - Trailer (english subtitles) from Sascha Zimmermann on Vimeo.





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typo - wink, nod.
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Congratulations Michel!!!!


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Thanks Breanne.....


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Just read the script. Oh teh LULZ! Actually made me laugh out loud.

awesome job.


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Congrats on getting this filmed!!!!

I read the script, and it made me literally laugh out loud - not just type LOL, but really laugh... you get the picture.

Here's to your continued success!!  


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Watched the whole film last night. Great direction.... Worth to watch.....


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L0ve the ending Congrats
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Very good script, there's few that can actually make me smile.

As said before, I would expect some more hesitation from the maid, but who knows the story behind her except for you? Former assassin maid who got confused between jobs, maybe?
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I've just been told that PRO KOPF has been accepted into this years Short Film Corner at Cannes Film Festival. Very excited and so so proud of the movie.

Last year it was Silent Dark Eyes.



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Congrats Michel

That's incredible

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Quoted from michel
I've just been told that PRO KOPF has been accepted into this years Short Film Corner at Cannes Film Festival. Very excited and so so proud of the movie.

Last year it was Silent Dark Eyes.



Michel


Wow, two years in a row!
You must be very proud.

Congrats,
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https://vimeo.com/117147918

The full film is now online, for free, for everyone.

Enjoy


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Michael,

Some comments can lead to despair.  Take all good ones to heart, deep six the rest.

Nice job.  Good surprise ending.  I'm not sold on the maid's quick acceptance of the offer.  And I think the man might hae started lower, working up to the eventual amount.  Then, there's the bit about the location of the gun.  How can the man know the man about to be killed keeps a gun in the same place.  In fact, how does the man know the layout of the apartment?  Now, those problems are easily solved, but the audience will spot them immediately and not give the film the attention it deserves.  

With a bit of rewriting, you can persuade the maid in a more believeable fashion and get past the obvious logic problems.

Good job.

Best
Richard
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Michel,

I have to say that I prefer the beginning as it was filmed. I believe it better sets up the rest of the story and doesn't give away too much too soon because it leads you to believe the film is going in a completely different direction. However, the ending is classic. The only question is why would he be "livid" instead of shocked or surprised? I enjoyed it immensely.

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