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Posted: September 1st, 2007, 11:41pm Report to Moderator
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Thanks for the read and feedback, Mike.
I am redrafting now.
It is hard to know wether to tone down the dialect. I know some readers will stumble over the words but I thought their dialect would reflect very common simple folks that have very little to do with society.
Thanks again Mike.


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Elisabeth,

I read this, and before the ending, I already knew how this was going to end.  How?  What gave away the ending?  With his wife near death, and the sacred tree with their initials on it was diseased, and was chopped down, I knew Sam would find Juliet dead upon his return from the woods.  A rather sad tale, almost a fairy tale.  A Disney type story.  It read very easy, and it pulls at the heart strings.
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