Hey Helio.

I must say, it was a really good, dramatic read.

All the characters seemed real and you wrote for them really well. I never write shorts as i feel that i can't tell the story in a few pages but you did that really well.

The story was short and sweet, so well done

Hi, Shepard, thanks for your support!

Hello Helio,

I pmd you on this.  (Ok that's really weird coming from me.  PMD?)  I'm not a chat-speak kind of person.

This one shouldn't sit on a shelf, or float in virtual space as the case may be.

I was truly impressed by this!  Yes, it can undergo the revisions process, but it's got HEART.  And lots of it.

Sandra

I'm so flattered with your kind words Sandra. Thanks, dear!

I barely have time for anything these days, but for a Helio script, I will make the time.

Very nice quick story which reminded me a little of your play at first, as Helen did all the talking.  The action flowed nicely and Joshua waking up matched our waking from the dream that was the first four pages, as the change from the pas tto the present is simliarly jarring.  I really like how the beginning and the end descriptions dovetail together.

That's why I always make the time.

It's worth it.

My SS friend, what can I say about your comment? Just...I'm so...well...thank you so much that's all I can say!