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The Elevator Most Belonging To Alice - Semi Final Bluecat, Runner Up Nashville Inner Journey - Page Awards Finalist - Bluecat semi final Grieving Spell - winner - London Film Awards. Third - Honolulu Ultimate Weapon - Fresh Voices - second place IMDb link... http://www.imdb.com/name/nm7062725/?ref_=tt_ov_wr
Hey James- Second story I have read of yours. Dude, you are one talented writier. Loved the story. Sean is the Dexter of vampires. Take out the baddies. lol. Serious though, great job. Can't wait to read more of your stuff. Dirk
The Elevator Most Belonging To Alice - Semi Final Bluecat, Runner Up Nashville Inner Journey - Page Awards Finalist - Bluecat semi final Grieving Spell - winner - London Film Awards. Third - Honolulu Ultimate Weapon - Fresh Voices - second place IMDb link... http://www.imdb.com/name/nm7062725/?ref_=tt_ov_wr
Thanks Brett. Pretty cool to see your name on a poster that could very well be hanging on the outside wall of a cinema. These guys are definitely doing a knock out job promoting this film.
Just saw the trailer. Got to say that the production value here is excellent. Just look at that photography - that's how you do lighting. Far too many shorts try and cut corners and end up looking like shit. These guys know what they're doing.
Yeah, the DP here definitely knows how to make a professional looking film. It was shot in 5K on a Red Epic-X. Here's a shot of the camera on the train...
Good read. Congrats on it's development. The exchange was good, you gave the characters something to disagree about. The topic itself, I'm sure we've all had with ourselves or others about vampire lore. I think that was the most vital strategy to your approach. I'm sure you've gotten tons of feedback, already. So, looking forward to future stories.
BLB
Commodus: But the Emperor Claudius knew that they were up to something. He knew they were busy little bees. And one night he sat down with one of them and he looked at her and he said, "Tell me what you have been doing, busy little bee..."
I was talking about the film. However James' comment has disappeared. so, I'm not crazy. lol.
SPOILERS!
Liked this. Congrats on showing the book. How the hell was that possible? lol
My suggestions:
Not sure if it's possible, but I think it would have been better to have the vampire sitting next to his victim.
Close to the end, when the vampire calls Lisa, I think it would be better if we don't see him until Lisa turns around.
But it looks great. Good luck and congrats on getting this made especially with that book in there. lol.
Gabe
Just Murdered by Sean Elwood (Zombie Sean) and Gabriel Moronta (Mr. Ripley) - (Dark Comedy, Horror) All is fair in love and war. A hopeless romantic gay man resorts to bloodshed to win the coveted position of Bridesmaid. 99 pages. https://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-comedy/m-1624410571/