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danbotha
Posted: October 24th, 2012, 11:39pm Report to Moderator
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Shit that was good, James!

Those are some talented film makers you're involved with.

Seriously, that was wicked!


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jwent6688
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Thanks for watching, Dan.

This is a top notch crew all the way around. Was lucky they found this script. Al, the director, wants to continue on with Sean's character. He's thinking Sean gets captured and an interrogation room scene.

I'll admit, I'm drawing some blanks at the moment as to where to take it. I think I may just have to borrow Brett's Lie Detector and plug a vampire into it.  

James


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jwent6688
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Just a quick shout out to Don for posting this on the homepage. It shot from 18k views to over 20k in an instant. This site has some pull, folks!

James


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Scar Tissue Films
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Excellent film James.

I'm very pleased for you!

Very well filmed, strong tension and natural acting.
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Great job! That was cool with the blood shooting out.
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Electric Dreamer
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Hey James,

You've got your own prefect storm of production going on up in here.
I hope it's being submitted to some west coast film fests.
Would love to see it out here!
Congrats on the 20k!

Regards,
E.D.


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jwent6688
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Thanks for watching, Rick. As a talented filmaker yourself, we appreciate your praise!

Kev, thanks for checking it out. I'm glad they didn't skimp on the blood at the end.

Brett, I hope you know I was joking about the Lie Detector copy, but that was the first thing to come to mind when the director told me where he wants to take this next. Was thinking Sean let's himself get caught in order to meet the FBI agent who's been following him, but he turns the table on him. I promise, no finger in the sandwich. That's all you.

There are several ways to get into the biz. The director is definitely hoping to score funds for a feature based on the success of his shorts. I hope I can help. I will keep you all posted about film fest entries. I wonder if this thing taking off so fast online will hurt our chances at Sundance.

Eitherway, whatever I write for the next episode will probably run the gammit here before it gets put to film. SP only got better because of the comments.

James


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Hey James,

Very cool video. You must be on cloud 9 seeing your work come to life.

I don't know you personally but I've read some of your work. You're a talented writer, extremely impressive. Congrats on your success. - Dirk
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Hey James,

I'm not here much, but I saw the video on the front page and was highly impressed by the quality of both the script and the film.

Well done.
Chazz
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Hi James,

That looked pretty impressive, I must say. Loved the story and the production was top notch.

Getting your work produced must be a hell of a buzz. Something for all us Newbs to aspire to

Kip.
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Neat script! Probably couldn't have asked for better as far as the film production for a short goes.  
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I'm the director of So Pretty and I just wanted to stop by and say thanks for all the comments. James is an amazing writer and I feel eternally grateful to him for letting us turn his amazing script into a film.

With that said, wait to see what we've been cooking!



Coming soon.  


Producer/Director of The Dollmaker by Matias Caruso
Producer/Director of So Pretty/Dark by James Williams

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jwent6688
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Al,

Good to see you on the boards. I did start a thread about So Dark already...

http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-workinprogress/m-1359666953/s-0/

I've been keeping the folks here updated. Doing my best to build the hype.  

James


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Hah. Just shows how often I come here. If I wasn't making all your scripts James I'd probably be here more often! Glad to see you have the hype machine under control, it's in good hands!

Al.


Producer/Director of The Dollmaker by Matias Caruso
Producer/Director of So Pretty/Dark by James Williams
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Written well... just a little too predictable and lacking an ironic twist. You could have twisted it up by making Lisa the real vampire and Sean just an armchair professional. However it's up to you what story you want to tell. Good luck with it.
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