FANTASTIC NEWS BRETT!!!!!

Keep us updated and don't forget about us little folk when you go big time.

Shawn.....><

Way to go!
Very impressed and excited for you.

Great to hear, Associate Producer Martin!

Keep it going and keep us in the loop.

Quoted from Dreamscale Great to hear, Associate Producer Martin! Keep it going and keep us in the loop.

Thanks to all for the well wishes!
I really couldn't ask for much more for a first deal.
Two production companies partnering up for my work is humbling and gratifying.

I believe it says a lot that my first credit will be produced by others.
Didn't go all writer/producer/director/editor on my own work.
I found others who believed in my material enough to do all the heavy lifting.

And...
They're happy to keep me around and kickstart my producing experience.
Which should demonstrate my willingness to collaborate with colleagues.

It was important to me to angle this into a producer credit if feasible.
That first credit tends to define you in how industry folk look at you.

So this agreement is pretty friggin ideal for my goals.
Once things are all officialized and stuff, I spill details.

Regards,
E.D.

This was a nice read. I like the story. And I was surprise that it takes place in Puerto Rico. I'm from Puerto Rico. nice job Brett.

Brett,

Congrats on negotiating an associate producer credit on your short.

It's very well done. I was going to put notes up here, but I didn't find anything glaring. Strapped guy looks like he's in trouble; then he flips the situation around. His interrogator becomes the scared one.

I can tell that you put a lot of effort on this one. I think you should convert this into a feature, if your deal allows it. This short could be your opening ten minutes.

Good luck!

Quoted from javisiete This was a nice read. I like the story. And I was surprise that it takes place in Puerto Rico. I'm from Puerto Rico. nice job Brett.

Hey Javisiete!

Thanks for the read. I'm glad you enjoyed the script.
I changed the setting to San Juan for a Puerto Rican director friend.

If your local, you should look him up!
http://www.burningphoenixfilms.com/

Regards,
E.D.

Quoted from kingcooky555 Brett, Congrats on negotiating an associate producer credit on your short. It's very well done. I was going to put notes up here, but I didn't find anything glaring. Strapped guy looks like he's in trouble; then he flips the situation around. His interrogator becomes the scared one. I can tell that you put a lot of effort on this one. I think you should convert this into a feature, if your deal allows it. This short could be your opening ten minutes. Good luck!

Hey Cooky!

Thanks for the kind words. It's always appreciated.
I did intend this script to be expandable.
Funny you should mention the feature thing...

What started out as an option with a director, has evolved.
Now an actor/producer wants to purchase the script for himself.
So, it's quite likely that they see feature potential they want to develop.
Anything more than a simple option is way above my head.
So, best leave it to the agent!

Regards,
E.D.

Quoted from Electric Dreamer Hey Javisiete! Thanks for the read. I'm glad you enjoyed the script. I changed the setting to San Juan for a Puerto Rican director friend. If your local, you should look him up! http://www.burningphoenixfilms.com/ Regards, E.D.

Thanks, I will check him out. And congratulations for your achievment I didn't know it will be produced until now. You did a great job.

Oh and if you can check this script of mine. I would appreciate it. No one have review it yet. I would like to hear some feedbacks. It is called Insanity. You have to download it through this link

http://www.mediafire.com/?z6wkbkwc7zdj89w

cause the one that they placed in the board marks an error.

Quoted from javisiete Thanks, I will check him out. And congratulations for your achievment I didn't know it will be produced until now. You did a great job. Oh and if you can check this script of mine. I would appreciate it. No one have review it yet. I would like to hear some feedbacks. It is called Insanity. You have to download it through this link http://www.mediafire.com/?z6wkbkwc7zdj89w cause the one that they placed in the board marks an error.

Quid Pro Quo.
I'll take a look.

E.D.

hey wow, i noticed this is getting produced - actually followed the link from "my script getting produced" to here, and realised it was one of the first screenplays i read on the site.

cool story bro'

even cooler result!

congrats

This is, by a long-shot, the best short I've read on SS thus far.  A compact, concise, yet robust thriller. (Real talk) This sh*t sizzled, son! 4real!

Quoted from marriot hey wow, i noticed this is getting produced - actually followed the link from "my script getting produced" to here, and realised it was one of the first screenplays i read on the site. cool story bro' even cooler result! congrats

Hey Marriot!

Thanks for the kind words.
I'd forgotten about that "getting produced" thread.
We signed the contracts early this summer
The producers are excited about developing the lead into a feature property.
And I believe the best way to promote that character would be through the short.
So, we'll see what happens!

Regards,
E.D.

Quoted from rmaze This is, by a long-shot, the best short I've read on SS thus far.  A compact, concise, yet robust thriller. (Real talk) This sh*t sizzled, son! 4real!

Hey Maze!

I"m glad you enjoyed the script.
It was a lot of fun to write.
Hopefully the rest of the production will be just as exciting!
When there's news to report, I'll do so here.

Regards,
E.D.

My reviews are normally 18 pages long. However considering that Lie Detector was posted last year, has been hitched for production, and boasts 13 pages of replies before me, might make that kind of moot.

All of that is practically an excuse for me not really having any criticisms to donate, but it makes the decision sound more legitimate, so I'm sticking to it. The only thing I would've said is that the line: "Paul misses with a roundhouse punch, then a sweep kick" (p8) left me wondering whether you meant that he misses both the punch and the kick, or misses the punch then lands the kick.

The entirety of the piece was well-written, captivating, though not something I can say I've never seen before in crime procedural television shows and movies. Such is not to say that I didn't remain interested the whole way through.

Good job.