Hey, Sean,

Thanks for sharing.  As stated above, it's not easy to write a one page movie, so kudos.  The only thing I found disturbing was that he went out and bought his mom's entire collection of porn movies instead of waiting for the box set.

Good job.

One pagers are notoriously difficult to write but you did a good job. As Michael said, there's an impact once you finish the script but it's diluted by the shock being foreseen. There's not major work needed. A couple of tweaks could give you a sleight of hand that would surely benefit the script. Good work.

Firstly, I'm new, so Hi. (Thanks also to Don for activating my account.)

I registered yesterday and read a lot of scripts, but this one that has really stuck in my memory. I like it. It's fucked up, but I like it!

I'd change how she dies though. I formed the impression that she does what she does purely to support her son, so a plane ride seems like an unnecessary expense, suggesting she lives a lavish lifestyle.

Just my opinion, anyway. Perhaps I've read too much into it and if that's not what you wanted to portray, then fair enough.

Hi there

really liked it despite it being a one pager and one line of dialogue. Its a nice idea and i like how it only fit one page.

Well done.

It was a bit sick lol but I liked it! You put so much on one page. Think you killed her just fine...Kudos