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AtholForsyth
Posted: January 2nd, 2014, 5:39pm Report to Moderator
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what is the logical conection?

If you're talking about Des or whatever her name is being the devil  inside Janet's head, then It's all about Des, she has the biggest and most prominent part.

The kissing thing outside the Janet's front door is to fast for me, it's my opinion, dont tell me to read Mills and Boons you cheeky f****r, suck it up.

The rip off name thing is 'All about Eve' and 'All about Steve' Apart from that it doesn't project what the story is all about .

THE WANKING CHAIR

Think about it, smoke some weed, Snort some speed
It's Des the b**** that'll make you bleed
Nasty is the tool. The 5 second rule
Dont treat me like no mother F**king fool

Sanding off your finger prints,  the wife's out of town
Clicking keys, Pants down
Hide the python when your mum comes around
A pocket rocket, a mini alligator
Enough for now
I'll catch you later
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DustinBowcot
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Quoted from AtholForsyth
what is the logical conection?

If you're talking about Des or whatever her name is being the devil  inside Janet's head, then It's all about Des, she has the biggest and most prominent part.

The kissing thing outside the Janet's front door is to fast for me, it's my opinion, dont tell me to read Mills and Boons you cheeky f****r, suck it up.

The rip off name thing is 'All about Eve' and 'All about Steve' Apart from that it doesn't project what the story is all about .

THE WANKING CHAIR

Think about it, smoke some weed, Snort some speed
It's Des the b**** that'll make you bleed
Nasty is the tool. The 5 second rule
Dont treat me like no mother F**king fool

Sanding off your finger prints,  the wife's out of town
Clicking keys, Pants down
Hide the python when your mum comes around
A pocket rocket, a mini alligator
Enough for now
I'll catch you later


There isn't any such thing as a rip off title. If I wanted to call the film Top Gun, I could.

You're entitled to your opinion of course, however I'm also entitled to tell you it is wrong. If you want to read more romance, try family sagas.

You still haven't made the logical connection. Yet you can pick out two films with similar titles that also seem to have more than one actor in them and they're just fine. Interesting.

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DustinBowcot
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Thanks for doing that so quickly. New draft of this script is up.
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Posted: January 26th, 2014, 6:27pm Report to Moderator
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I liked it.

The ending was a nice 'ha ha' moment on Janet.


--Steve
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DustinBowcot
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Glad you got something out of it. Thanks for the response.
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DustinBowcot
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In this draft I've gotten rid of the hospital scene and included a new scene at the beginning. This gives the bonus of not needing to mock up a hospital room and helps give a better contrast between the opening and closing scenes. Makes the ending more ironic.

This script is no longer available.

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Just a little update on this.

We finished auditions on Saturday 3rd May and the main cast have been chosen. We're really lucky to have gotten the quality of actors that we have. It was quite a tough choice in the end.

First rehearsals are on 31st May, with a view to filming on 28-30th June. Locations are set, costumes are done, all involved are excited.

Here's a link to the IMDB page: http://www.imdb.com/title/tt3629428/?ref_=nm_flmg_wr_2
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SAC
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Great news, Dustin! Are you directing this. Remember a while back you said you were, but maybe I was mistaken. Anyway, all the best.

Some great news on the boards lately with shorts and features being produced. Keep it up!

Steve


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Hey Dustin, great for you! I believe one of the best things writers can do to get better is making their own films. You learn tons.

This is also a very small world it appears. Val Monk is also a friend and client of another SS member, Kevan Craft. He's not been around lately, but I remember he did her website or posters or something. Small world.  

Good Luck with this.  


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Great news, indeed. Where abouts are you shooting?


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Homepage looks very good. From the script, I expected older actors, but it makes sense with regards to achieve a younger audience.

I had a warning with entering the page: Invalid date something...

Congrats. Seems as if you push the right buttons with your projects recently.  



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Cannot wait to see it mate!

Shooting finished now?

Anthony


Anthony Cawood - Award winning screenwriter
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DustinBowcot
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Quoted from PrussianMosby
Homepage looks very good. From the script, I expected older actors, but it makes sense with regards to achieve a younger audience.

I had a warning with entering the page: Invalid date something...

Congrats. Seems as if you push the right buttons with your projects recently.  


Thank you. We went with the people that stood out the most talent-wise. The Nurse is in her 50s. Janet, late 30s, the other two are mid-twenties. Benjamin though is great, he's losing weight to play the part and is determined to show up on set a complete physical and mental wreck, his words.

That happens on FF with the date. Try Chrome and everything works as it should.
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I'm sure it's going to be awesome and best of luck with the shoot on 28th and with the the BAFTAs!

Look forward to seeing the film at some point.

Anthony


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Available Short screenplays - http://www.anthonycawood.co.uk/short-scripts
Available Feature screenplays - http://www.anthonycawood.co.uk/feature-film-scripts/
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Ack!!!  This title still keeps freaking me out!!

That aside, congrats and best of luck on the shoot, Dustin.  

--Janet (the other one)
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