Hey Mark
    I'm reading the 3rd and last part of the Jesus trilogy.  Here goes:

1.  top of page 2, you say homeless people are shop karts.  Shouldn't it be shopping carts or karts (british thingy maybe

Well, that was short.  I agree with all the comments above.  How do we know the guy smells like death?  

And you don't take it far enough.  I think I read them in order.  I think the quality of the idea kinda went down with each story.  The first one was really funny, the second was good, the last was perhaps rushed or something.

Again, you have a lot of good ideas, but, you do hold yourself back.  This is God, Jesus, and Satan.  You can go to town.

Oh, I'd be prepared to doge lightning bolts, but, as long as you do a better job then Cartman (for HumanCentipad) you'll be fine.....  Really.

Can't add much more other then rewrite and make it crazier.  

More "unlikely" scripts pls, these are hiliarious  

I like to see more unbecoming behavior of Jesus though, the sidekicks steal the show so far. Thanks for the laf

Nice one, put them all together and call it 'The passion of the christ'