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Warren
Posted: June 18th, 2016, 2:34am Report to Moderator
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Hi,

I  quite enjoyed the concept for this.

Has been a bit of discussion on the technical side of this script , as in the use of the split screen. I did find it a little hard to keep it in mind and kept seeing a single scene in my head, either the car or the room. Not sure if there is a better way to write it.

Not really much else to say.


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Mr.Ripley
Posted: June 19th, 2016, 6:43pm Report to Moderator
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Thanks for the read. Will read yours. The technical side has been talked about but I'll still stick with this. As a writer, you're a director as well. Thanks for your input though.

Gabe


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