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MarkRenshaw
Posted: January 12th, 2016, 3:26am Report to Moderator
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Awesome! I love the shot at the end with the woman in the background doing a great impression of ‘The Ring’ - very creepy.

I remember I reviewed this a while back and suggested using a child instead of a college student, I’m glad to see you went that way as it works really well. So hey, where’s my credit then?

Great job, congratulations.

-Mark


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Quoted from MarkRenshaw
... I reviewed this a while back and suggested using a child instead of a college student ... . So hey, where’s my credit then? Mark


You weren't the only one, Mark.   He'd be broke by the time he paid the rest of us.

Good on ya, Chris. Great to see you doing well.

I for one can't wait to see the third in the 'under the bed' trilogy.



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Quoted from MarkRenshaw

I remember I reviewed this a while back and suggested using a child instead of a college student, I’m glad to see you went that way as it works really well. So hey, where’s my credit then?
LOL

I'm glad Adam (the director) was able to find a younger girl for the part. Looking at it now, I honestly don't think it would've worked with an older character.

Thanks to everyone for watching!




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jwent6688
Posted: January 20th, 2016, 4:47pm Report to Moderator
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Good show. Very effective. The final scene with the woman standing behind her gives a nice chill. Well done. Another great short for your resume.

James


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bert
Posted: January 20th, 2016, 6:00pm Report to Moderator
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It does look good.

A younger girl was the right choice, but changing the note from your script -- "girl" to "woman" -- and removing "please" -- weakens it.

They should have consulted you first


Hey, it's my tiny, little IMDb!
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A bit late on the band wagon.

I saw the link to the short so decided to read the short then watch it.

I really loved the script. Right up my alley. Just great.

I followed it up with the short. They really brought you're work to life and did it the justice it deserved.

Excellent work all round.


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