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Posted: December 14th, 2014, 3:35pm Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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#Friendship by Thulasidasan Jeewaratinam - Short, Drama - Three friends - separated. One shot. Can they all meet back before they all depart in separate ways again? 20 pages - pdf, format


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Posted: December 15th, 2014, 2:59am Report to Moderator
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https://www.google.com/accounts/o8/id?id=AItOawmRifNb-LaoNXXve7jpqC8ePwg3pbfIeto


So when it has come time to write your name in... rather than just writing your name like any normal person, you've decided to cut n paste a link to your Google ID. Which is also an XML file that I can't open because it belongs to the Microsoft Corporation.

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#FRIENDSHIP by Thulasidasan Jeewaratinam

(CONT'D)

(CONT'D)

(CONT'D)

(CONT'D)

FROM THE BLACK we hear a phone ring, rapidly followed by an
answer dial click sound. We hear ...



That is your open. It's a mess. What's with the we hear? We know it is over black... I think... so why mention what we hear? Just write what it is we hear without writing, 'we hear'. It goes without saying.

From checking out the rest, it seems that you have a way to go before you're at a pro standard. Your English is not up to scratch.
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