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Don
Posted: April 18th, 2015, 6:21pm Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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The Woman In The Red Dress by John Stone - Short, Film Noir - One Man's solipsism completes his fantasy. 15 pages - pdf, format


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Damnit, get to the point!

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John,

Formatting alert. What software are you using? Everything is off. Your 13 page short is more like 18.

Your writing is not bad, very graphic...  Reference the unshaven vagina!

I would lose the word SOLIPSISM. My auto-predictor doesn't even know that word.

So, does John actually exist?

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Damnit, get to the point!

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Hmm. Deleted posts. Rofl.
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Yep, I was being unnecessarily argumentative. Must a' got up on the wrong side of the bed.  


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Formatted as a stage play. Soz about that. Will change it to script mode  asap. Thanks guys
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