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The Head Office by K Robert Keller - Short - The head man in charge of guillotine operations falls under the knife. 10 pages - pdf, format


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Hey Robert,
This was a pretty entertaining story. The dialogue was sharp and witty and also fit the time period kind of like a Mel Brooks film. Jacques is a well written character. Everyone was well written including the hecklers. The only thing was the ending felt a bit rushed. Pierre explaining everything in the last line was a turn off. In all it was a fun read!


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