Thanks for the revision update, Don.

I played around with this a bit and took some of your guy's suggestions.

Thanks everyone!

Tony.

I found this hard to get through.

I had to whip out my dictionary a few times.

Unfortunately it limped along and never came to fruition.

It's not your fault.  It happens to a lot of writers.

Jordan

Quoted from Nomad I found this hard to get through. I had to whip out my dictionary a few times. Unfortunately it limped along and never came to fruition. It's not your fault.  It happens to a lot of writers. Jordan

Lol, that makes me just want to wilt away.

If you guys are interested,

Cock Man 2 - Die Hard-on Die

can be found here...

https://www.scriptrevolution.com/scripts/cock-man-2-die-hard-on-die

until Don can 'get it up' on this site.

Tony.

Quoted from TonyDionisio If you guys are interested, Cock Man 2 - Die Hard-on Die can be found here... https://www.scriptrevolution.com/scripts/cock-man-2-die-hard-on-die until Don can 'get it up' on this site. Tony.

Hi Tony,

On 12/3 I posted an updated version of "Cock Man 2 - Die Hard-on Die "  that you originally submitted in October. Is this a different version?  Did I miss an updated version?  If so, could I trouble you to resubmit. My apologies for the oversight.

- Don

So, I came late to the party on this one.

Yep, that's some right old offensive stuff on the page. Rude, surreal and offensive, and I liked most of it. The lesbians ain't gonna fly in the current political climate, not that they really should, I think that was possibly the most offensive bit.

The technical stuff all seemed pretty on the money, and I can't deny the creativity. Basically it kept reminding me of Balls Out, by the Robotard 3000 (this one here, not the crappy looking teen movie - http://www.therobotard8000.com/BALLS%20OUT_WEB.pdf). The lads who wrote Balls Out nailed the formatting, and produced a work of offensive greatness, but they had a better crafted story line than Cock Man.

So then. A bit up and down, I see there's a sequel so I shall venture onwards and explore.

Cam

I can't even begin to tell you how much I laughed my damn ass off reading these, the descriptions alone had me in tears. But good luck getting it filmed! lol

Ummmm....

It's not satirizing anything.  And even if we accept the premise of a large-membered superhero, it's not logical that said member could have healing powers.

So it's double entendre and dick jokes for the sake of it, with offensive descriptions like carpet munchers, lesbos and ugly.

And the note to self line was the only one I chuckled at.

Sorry, not for me, but if people are laughing at it and talking about it, more (dick) power to you I guess...