A little Inferno, a little Spectre.

Being a Teufelshunde myself, I recognized the name instantly, and knew where this was going.  Once I saw Angela I was expecting a "Good vs. Evil" storyline to play out, but you surprised me with the ending.

The inclusion of Dave was out of place.  He was just a device to move the story forward, his dialogue was unnatural, and he didn't really add to the story.  I understand what you want to do with him, but as it is, it doesn't work for me.

I saw the ending like the scene from Spectre where the two assassins vie for the role of taking out 007.  And by "vie" I mean one kills the other to get the job.

Thanks for the read, Dustin.

Jordan

I really enjoyed it, thanks for sharing