This is scheduled to shoot at the end of November, film maker is hoping to release pre-Xmas...

Quoted from AnthonyCawood ...film maker is hoping to release pre-Xmas...

'Cause nothing says "Christmas", like incestuous soroicide.

Jordan

Nice one!

Shooting tomorrow and just heard that they've tweaked it... now sisters!

Ooh, curious why the did that. Did they tell you why? Is it the incestuous angle which would come across even if sisters.

Perhaps they should be twins - nice twin/evil twin.

Or, just friends on a play-date. That way they could be male and female, female and female, male and male..

I'm exausting myself with the possibilities now.  

Interested to see how this one comes off.

What makes me most happy is that there's a "sold" next to the thread title. I want to see more of that.

Apparently they got better talent with the girls that auditioned... interesting twist though

I like the Sold label too, have someone circling Teddy Bear at the moment, so fingers crossed.

And here's the film = https://vimeo.com/193438078

Anthony

Filmed

First Kiss - A Short Film from Justin Stearns on Vimeo.

That looked great! Congrats!

However, I think the filmmakers failed to deliver the punchline that worked so well in the script.

I was almost afraid to watch this. I think the execution was very, very good, however I have to agree with Pia. Everything spot on. Actresses great, stunning, lighting, sound, perfect. I think the reveal was a little too soon. However, if you haven't read the script, you wouldn't know.

Don

Haven't read the script (yet!), but did give the film a go. Like Pia and Don said, technically it's very well made. Really enjoyed the cinematography. Unfortunately the ending didn't have the impact I think it was meant to. It seems like the "twist" is given away almost immediately. Maybe it works better in the script... Either way, congrats on getting it filmed.

* Well damn, it seems the script has been removed.
*Don's edit - the script is still available at: https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/35583122/First%20Kiss.pdf

~Zack~

Hi Pia/Don/Zack

Thanks for having a watch... I think the reveal may be more obvious if you've read the script, though Zack saw it early too, it's also a very short short so that might make it more difficult.

But overall I think the production values are great, the acting is really good and the switch to two girls has added an extra dimension.

I'm really pleased with this one given I almost didn't put it out in the world!

Zack, script is still up on my website - http://www.anthonycawood.co.uk/first-kiss/4593064844

Have another, called Grandma, which should see the light of day in next month or so.

Anthony

Looks great!  

Nolan