KJ,
EXT. A HUNDRED YARDS AWAY - CONT’D -I don't think that should be written as a slugline. A HUNDRED YARDS AWAY -You've already established being outside so I'd write it as action instead.
I'd remove continued from the bottom of each page. Eliminate CU for close up and write it instead of directing it. His boots land in the mud. -I think we all can visualize without telling us close up.
Was CONT’D... used as a replacement for Beat or A Beat? If so, I've never seen that one before.
Keep writing and best of luck!
All the best, Marty |