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Fausto
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Funny, funny, funny and smart writing. I love the short descriptions...great job!
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Warren
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Thanks, fausto.

I'm glad you enjoyed it.


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Hi Warren, very cool, funny I liked it. 😊


"Turn that off, our friend has just been killed in a fatal sunlight accident!"....

'What we do in the Shadows.'
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Thanks for reading, Kristen.


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Hahaha. I like it. I like it a lot.

But yeah, what MakeItZero said would defo make for a better pay off at the end.
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Cheers for the read, Brandon.

It's getting some interest in it's current form so probably won't be changing anything until that falls through.


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Cheers for the read, Brandon.

It's getting some interest in it's current form so probably won't be changing anything until that falls through.

It would be a fun one to make, so I'm sure it'll get picked up.
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Trauma Teddy has been optioned to be turned into a live action piece.


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Quoted from Warren
Trauma Teddy has been optioned to be turned into a live action piece.


Very cool - can't wait to see it


My Scripts can all be seen here:

http://dlambertson.wix.com/scripts
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Warren
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Filmmaker decided not to use this so it is once again available. Shortest option ever.


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Sorry the option didn't work out

I liked it, short and punchy! Didn't twig what was going on until she picked up teddy

Very original and a welcome break from some other 'comedy' shorts I've read tonight


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Warren
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Thanks for checking this out, Matt.

I really love this script. It’s probably my personal favourite out of all the shorts I’ve written.

Let me know if you need something read.


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Clever and funny, in a very dark way. I liked it.

This one was a difficult one to pull off, because of the topic, but you did a great job.

What a shame the option didn't work.


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Warren
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Thanks for the read, David.

I actually hung on to this story for quite a while because I was worried how it would be received. I'm glad readers have enjoyed it.

Is there anything you want read?


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