Divyansh,
Welcome to SS.
Your logline should be... A novice priest tries to successfully exorcise a young woman who doesn't want to let her demon go.
Your title page should have your name and your contact email.
Type FADE IN before starting the script.
Example; FADE IN INT. BEDROOM - DAY
Now,
You have a very good story here. This is a new take on a demon. I liked it.
There are plenty of repetitive things that you can trim and cut down this script to 6 pages. It will be a much better script then.
Good luck with this. |