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Giant Monsters Attack the Westcoast! by Robbie Young - Short, Comedy - When two giant rubber monsters begin wrecking havoc, the fate of the world rests on the back of a 13 y/o boy and his giant cardboard robot. 4 pages - pdf format

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With a title like that, I gotta read it. It's a common error but the saying is to wreak havoc, not wreck havoc.

Anyway, looks like you had some fun writing that - I doubt it's a story that will be made but you got some writing chops and an unorthodox style, and frankly I was all for it.

Best of luck to ya


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Hey, Robbie. You around?

Like Matthew, I too thought this was a creative and fun little script.

Hope to see more work from you.
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Robbie. That was a really great entertaining short that was well written. Cool!


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Agree with the above, super fun short that gave me quite a few chuckles.

Needs a really good edit but this was great.


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