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Who am I? A man with a hundred stories... you want to read one? Analyst, mentor, competition reader/judge, film critic, magazine article/blogger. https://simpsonliteraryagency.com/script-analyst
This is cute and amusing, and as animation (even though I wanted a teeny bit more) I think the punchline lands, but maybe could be given a little more? This is Abbott and Costello without a lot of range.
Forest owl just stairs ahead. Stares
Forest owl stairs ahead. Barn owl stairs him... Should be stares throughout. And: stares at him, or stares him down.
Fucking delinquent forest owl's. No apostrophe last word, last line.
I'm on the fence regarding the expletives, especially if your demographic is kids, which it probably isn't. Anyway, just my thoughts.
Thank's for the read and comment LC. Yeah, I overlooked that typo - Stare/stairs. This is one of those really short stories we "spit out" after smoking the leaves of the wisdom weed.
Who am I? A man with a hundred stories... you want to read one? Analyst, mentor, competition reader/judge, film critic, magazine article/blogger. https://simpsonliteraryagency.com/script-analyst
thank you FrankH, for pointing that out - Cover page; Whoo whoo.
Best.
Who am I? A man with a hundred stories... you want to read one? Analyst, mentor, competition reader/judge, film critic, magazine article/blogger. https://simpsonliteraryagency.com/script-analyst
Who am I? A man with a hundred stories... you want to read one? Analyst, mentor, competition reader/judge, film critic, magazine article/blogger. https://simpsonliteraryagency.com/script-analyst