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Don
Posted: July 25th, 2022, 3:31pm Report to Moderator
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Happy Birthday by Frank B. Hansen - Short, Comedy - How could a pre-teen boy's family forget his birthday? 3 pages - pdf format

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Ahoy Frank

For what it's worth, and bearing in mind that everybody has different tastes and sense(s) of humor:

Clean and simple. Like black and white. I thought it was good for what it was. It made me smile, and made me chuckle.

It would be easy to film.

Best of Irish luck. _ghostie gal


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Hey, ghostie gal,

Thanks for the Irish luck and peeking in.
If chuckle worthy, I'm happy.

Thanks,
Frank


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Happy Birthday
Size Doesn't Matter

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Unbreakable Bond
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Ani
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What a elegantly written screenplay.Your use of few words to write Happy birthday screenplay was enjoyable to read.
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FrankH
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Hey, Ani.

Thanks for checking in.
Glad you liked Happy Birthday.

Frank


FEATURES:
Strength of a Soul (Thriller/Supernatural)
Inconceivable Pain (Thriller)

SHORT COMEDY:
Heads or Tails
Happy Birthday
Size Doesn't Matter

SHORT DRAMA:
Imaginary Friend
Sleepwalking

SHORT THRILLER:
Unbreakable Bond
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