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Don
Posted: November 12th, 2017, 11:10am Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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The Happy Couple by Peter Maldonado - Short, Drama - {no logline} 7 pages - pdf, format

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Peter,

I tried to read your script to provide some feedback but the link says we need permission. You may want to fix that if you are looking for feedback.

Also, a logline would help greatly. That way people have some general idea of what they are going to be reading. That would also help with receiving additional feedback.

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