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Grandma Bear
Posted: September 12th, 2018, 6:19pm Report to Moderator
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I never thought this script would get picked up, but...  Here's a pic from the second production. Also, the guy that did the first one is shooting a sequel. You just never know what directors will like.  

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A second filmmaker made this one. I'm curious, if you have seen them, which one did you like best?  


TRUST ME (201 - SHORT FILM from Dylan Avery on Vimeo.



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Scar Tissue Films
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Hi Pia,

I just happened to catch the film on the roll at the top, then found the thread.

I thought the Mexican one was the better. It lacked some in production quality, but had a very intense atmosphere.


In terms of the story, I thought it was very strong.

For me, it just lacked a link between the guy following them and the reason the original guy had the kid.

I feel that they should have been connected. For example...that the Mother had disappeared and she was worried someone was after her kid.

As it was, it felt strange that that particular one was being targeted.

Your stuff always translates well to film. Keep it up.

Rick
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Quoted from Scar Tissue Films
Hi Pia,

I thought the Mexican one was the better. It lacked some in production quality, but had a very intense atmosphere.

In terms of the story, I thought it was very strong.

For me, it just lacked a link between the guy following them and the reason the original guy had the kid.

I feel that they should have been connected. For example...that the Mother had disappeared and she was worried someone was after her kid.

As it was, it felt strange that that particular one was being targeted.

Your stuff always translates well to film. Keep it up.

Rick


Thanks Rick!

I agree with you on all points. The guy that did the one in Queens actually made a sequel to the first one. In that one there's some things being explained and the mother is in it.

The guy that did the "Mexican" one shopped The Hit for a year, but was unable to get the funds for a proper film. We had a disagreement on a few things on the short. He is an accomplished and award winning documentarian.

Thanks for taking a look and the positive words.  



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Scar Tissue Films
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Ah, sorry.. I didn't mean to be racist!

It had such a thick atmosphere of Latin America, evoking the gritty realism of Mexican films that it just struck me as "Mexican" .
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No no! Nothing racist at all. I just referred to it as the Mexican one and the one from Queens to differentiate between the two.  


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