This is good.
There is a little problem with the dialogue here:
Wow, that is something to think about. The values of outer and inner beauty. What does that all mean?
Well it caused her to think about not only in this art, but she has also written about it in a book.
Very impressive. You just never know what surprises life will bring. Now, I’m really curious to see and meet her. Where is she?
On the other side of the room in a group.
It's a little bit teachy-preachy disguised in dialogue. How can you express this in another way?