If you are serious about screenwriting then you need to do a lot more studying of the craft (a lot more). The formatting isn't even close to being correct.
It reads as if you thought "I'll give script writing a go, how hard can it be" and just jumped right in.
You also missed to fill in the title page.
So yeah, study and practice before you get to the stage of posting scripts up for review or consideration.
Best of luck