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Unrequited by Ara Shahinian - Short, Drama - An obsessed lover who's had a change of heart stalks his ex on a train to win her back despite her being happily married and with her husband. 8 pages - pdf format
You really need a logline, we need to know what it's about, I nearly didn't read it because of no logline.
It's pretty well written, very descriptive, maybe too much for a 5 minute short. Budget wise it would be pretty high. I think you should have introduced the "MAN" as "DEMETRE".
I couldn't work out the bit below:
"the attendee anxiously directs him to an available seating towards the back but the Man suggests the seat next to him; a perfect angle on Lisette."
Oh OK, reading it again here I think I get it. Did you mean the seat next to where he was at that point in time?
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I appreciate you reading it, unfortunately I uploaded the wrong draft. Although I love this website, it's a nightmare to update your own thread or to post screenplays in real-time.
I have no idea how to remove this draft and to replace it with the current one. I believe this website would benefit from a newer system to give users more power, sorta like reddit. Sorry, I don't mean to be bossy or anything cause I'm certainly appreciative of this website.
Can any moderator please help me out here? Suggestions on how I can replace this screenplay?
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