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Don
Posted: January 19th, 2020, 8:03pm Report to Moderator
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The Reunion by Talaat Hassan - Short, Drama - A Jewish man in Germany during the late 1930s reminisces about his past whilst his settlement is being raided by Nazis. 2 pages - pdf format

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Talaat: the opening has a lot of errors.

This:


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INT. GERMANY - SMALL HOUSE - NIGHT - 1939

Film opens with a black screen and the sound of rain and
thunder in the background. Then, displayed on the screen in
white lettering, the words:
THE REUNION

DISSOLVE TO:

GERMANY - 1939

CUT TO BLACK.

Should be like this:

OVER BLACK

The sounds of rain and thunder.

FADE IN:

INT. SMALL HOUSE - NIGHT

Then write your opening description. Then:

SUPER: THE REUNION. GERMANY, 1939

Then continue.


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JohnMcCarthy
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There are some formatting errors, and the descriptive passages might be a little wordy from time to time. But this is a very nice and moving little vignette.
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Talaat
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Thank you very much for the feedback!
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Hi Talaat,

nice small story loved it can I adapt it? need permission.. becz it will be totally different in India.. but will try to make it...my mail id is manishnaidu.movies@gmail.com , if you can give yours..
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Your best chance of getting a hold of the writer since there's no contact info on the script, would be to pm Don, the webmaster, and ask him.

Good luck with the project.  


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