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Posted: September 24th, 2020, 8:43pm Report to Moderator
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This is a cool old-school script. I like the full-circle structure.

The back and forth about Missy vs. Melissa was effective and realistic. Great opening line, too.

Not sure why his wedding ring would set her off so much, especially if he was trying to talk her down from the ledge. I guess she wasn't completely stable.

Extra points for the description of 45 caliber nipples.
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Very nice. I found this very film-noir. Dialog was spot-on as well.
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Thanks so much to LC for the fantastic review on the home page! This was originally 'The Night Siren' but changed the title when I finally got around to revisit and revise (very minor changes within). I love the new title.
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