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Don
Posted: September 26th, 2020, 11:27am Report to Moderator
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Scars by Steven Sallie - Short, Drama - A young girl with something to hide prepares for prom.  1 page - pdf format

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I  like this - the writing is solid.

I t think it needs to be a bit longer - would have liked to see the end of the date


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Zack
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Interesting short. Sad, but honest.

Writing is good. Very visual. I like how you were able to get so much across with no dialog. That takes talent.

Feel like the ending needs something more. Not sure what...

Still, good work here. It would certainly be easy to film.
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Well written!

It tells a lot on a single page.  I wish it was longer.
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Quite nice! Visual. Easy to film. Very easy.

Good luck.


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Thanks for the kind words everyone! I was trying to do a one page script with no dialogue as a challenge. I agree I wish the ending was longer. I may expand on this one. Thanks again!
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