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Love, Race, and Media by Matt Brutsche - Short, Drama - Manchester United's former rock star GM, fired over his stance with the BAME rule the media tagged as racist, decides to set the record straight amid his failing health and do one final interview.   28 pages - pdf format

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I really liked this piece. It is honest and a little sad. It has been executed with confidence. For personal reasons I felt very sad ready this piece and for the sam reasons I was grateful for the ending.
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I'm British and know a lot about football, but have no idea what a GM is - In Britain, we just call them "Manager"

I think that if you're doing a script promoting an Un-PC/contrarian opinion on a controversial subject, the tone needs to be lighter and less hectoring. I definitely think that there are problems with the "quota" approach to diversity, but I think it's a mistake to oppose the unfair aspects of this approach with a solemn story where characters explain the messages incessantly...

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