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Tyler King
Posted: July 23rd, 2017, 7:01pm Report to Moderator
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Hey everyone, just want to let everyone know that my revision is now up on here when you click the script! Thanks Don for getting it posted.
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JamieB
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Great build in tension, solid horror moments. Only downside (?) was questions left hanging, but it's a short, so, mission accomplished

Wanted more, horror-chops showcased, good script!
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Tyler King
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Quoted from JamieB
Great build in tension, solid horror moments. Only downside (?) was questions left hanging, but it's a short, so, mission accomplished

Wanted more, horror-chops showcased, good script!


Yeah, the ending was left open on purpose. Thank you for the kind words though, I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
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Zack
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Hey Tyler, gave this a read. Here are my notes.

Why were they speeding down the driveway at the start? Seems odd to me. Stupid nitpick, sorry.

Really strong dialog for the most part.  Landon's is a little hit and miss.

Good use of jump scares mixed in with the building tension. Awesome stuff, man. The ending was familiar, but very suspenseful. Looking forward to seeing what else you've written.

~Zack~
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Tyler King
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Quoted from Zack
Hey Tyler, gave this a read. Here are my notes.

Why were they speeding down the driveway at the start? Seems odd to me. Stupid nitpick, sorry.


I can't really answer that, lol, you said yourself it's a nitpick, and no one else brought it up, so I'll leave it at that, haha.


Quoted from Zack
Really strong dialog for the most part.  Landon's is a little hit and miss.

Good use of jump scares mixed in with the building tension. Awesome stuff, man. The ending was familiar, but very suspenseful. Looking forward to seeing what else you've written.

~Zack~


Thanks, man! Really glad you enjoyed it.

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