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Don
Posted: October 29th, 2017, 4:40pm
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So, what are you writing?
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Close the Door by Oscar Moreno - Short, Horror - A girl pays the price for her absent-mindedness and discovers a dark secret about her life. 2 pages - pdf, format
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eldave1
Posted: October 30th, 2017, 7:43pm
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Oscar - didn't quite understand the story here. Seems like it is the opening to one rather than a complete one.
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OscarM
Posted: October 30th, 2017, 11:45pm
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Hey eldave, thanks for reading! I just wanted to do something really simple about a girl not knowing she lives with a monster inside her house and then accidentally unleashing it because she wasn't paying attention. You may be right, though. There's possibly more I could do with it. Again, thanks for reading and your feedback. PLease let me know if you ever need the favor returned!
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eldave1
Posted: October 31st, 2017, 1:47pm
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No problem - glad it helped
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JakeJon
Posted: November 1st, 2017, 9:19am
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OscarM
Posted: November 1st, 2017, 10:58am
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Thanks for reading me and for providing feedback again, JJ! I'm thinking up how to make it work better. Again, please let me know if you ever me to return the favor.
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Fausto
Posted: November 1st, 2017, 2:08pm
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Oscar, good story but in my view, too short. Readers/viewers cannot imagine everything you have in your creative mind. Do some work on it and you'll have a good script with many possibilities.
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OscarM
Posted: November 1st, 2017, 3:55pm
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Thanks for reading and for your comments, Fausto! Again, you're all giving me a lot to think about!
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Marty
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