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Warren
Posted: November 16th, 2019, 6:44pm Report to Moderator
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Congrats, was a good little script. Keep us posted.


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Congrats. Fingers crossed. Keep us posted.

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Just Murdered by Sean Elwood (Zombie Sean) and Gabriel Moronta (Mr. Ripley) - (Dark Comedy, Horror) All is fair in love and war. A hopeless romantic gay man resorts to bloodshed to win the coveted position of Bridesmaid. 99 pages.
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Kirsten
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Thanks Gabe and Warren, I'll definitely keep everyone posted...


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Matthew Taylor
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Well done Kirsten - Fingers crossed this one goes all the way.


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Kirsten
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Thanks Matthew....


"Turn that off, our friend has just been killed in a fatal sunlight accident!"....

'What we do in the Shadows.'
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Great thread, lol. Congrats on the pickup.

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Commodus: But the Emperor Claudius knew that they were up to something. He knew they were busy little bees. And one night he sat down with one of them and he looked at her and he said, "Tell me what you have been doing, busy little bee..."
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Kirsten
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Hi BLB,

Yeah, I got scared away, I wasn't planning on all the conflict lol... I wish I could have chimed back in earlier, but I was dealing with some personal stuff and didn't have my head in the right place to respond properly lol...

And thanks for the congrats....   I finally got the new draft of this up.  


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Kirsten
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This got picked up again.... I think the last guy has ditched it.... emailed him bout a month ago and haven't heard back...


"Turn that off, our friend has just been killed in a fatal sunlight accident!"....

'What we do in the Shadows.'
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Quoted from Kirsten
I think the last guy has ditched it.... emailed him bout a month ago and haven't heard back...


Bummer. But I guess that's just part of the game.

Hopefully this actually gets picked up. Good luck, Kirsten.
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Kirsten
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Thanks Zack, this new director has plans to incorporate this into a feature of short horrors, so sounds like it's a goer...😁.


"Turn that off, our friend has just been killed in a fatal sunlight accident!"....

'What we do in the Shadows.'
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Yuvraj
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Hi, Kirsten,

Read this one a while ago, so had to look around a bit in the forum to find it.

I really liked the silent intrusion and the payoff at the end for the Young Man's playing around.

I also think that a slightly different version of the story floats around on the internet as creepypasta( I guess). But even then, transforming it into your own script is a victory in itself.

Few problems( mainly with the sluglines) and a minor continuity error spotted. But I'm sure they already have been addressed.

One more thing, was it written in MS word? Just curious to know.

Also, congrats for the script been picked (again). How's the development?



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Kirsten
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Hey Yuvraj, sorry I didn't see this until just now!  Thanks heaps for taking a look.. I'm curious to see what the creepy pasta short is... I had no idea about that one lol.... Anyways the producer said everything is ready to go they are just waiting for things to open up.... the script had an extended re write, to fit into the horror anthology. It's one of four shorts. The producer is new but he's working on a werewolf feature with Kane Hodder, who's been in a few slasher horrors and has played Jason in the friday the 13th parts 7 to 10. The writer that worked on the Camper script is a director/producer/screenwriter who's written a tone of B slasher/comedy  films and dramas etc. His name is Rolf Kanefsky. if you have seen Scream, apparently people think that is a rip off of Rolfs first feature film in 1991 called 'there's something out there'. It's a comedy/horror.





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Update...This is the campaign for the horror anthology being made by Grimehouse Films. Eric Mathis and the team have done a great job and have raised 50,000 for the film.

https://www.indiegogo.com/projects/the-macabre-horror-movie/x/21778627#/



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Warren
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Wow, that's awesome, congrats!!


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Thanks Warren! Hows your comic sales coming along?


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