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The Camper - picked up (currently 3712 views) |
Warren |
Posted: November 16th, 2019, 6:44pm |
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Of The Ancients A man who has taught his mind to misbehave
LocationSydney, Australia Posts3897 Posts Per Day 1.36 |
Congrats, was a good little script. Keep us posted. |
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Mr.Ripley |
Posted: November 16th, 2019, 8:01pm |
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LocationNew York Posts1979 Posts Per Day 0.31 |
Congrats. Fingers crossed. Keep us posted.
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Kirsten |
Posted: November 17th, 2019, 6:20am |
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January Project Group Giving up is not an option....
LocationKiwi in Ohio Posts373 Posts Per Day 0.13 |
Thanks Gabe and Warren, I'll definitely keep everyone posted... |
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'What we do in the Shadows.' |
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Matthew Taylor |
Posted: November 18th, 2019, 5:50am |
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LocationShakespeare's county Posts1770 Posts Per Day 0.89 |
Well done Kirsten - Fingers crossed this one goes all the way. |
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Two steps to writing a good screenplay: 1) Write a bad one 2) Fix it |
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Kirsten |
Posted: November 18th, 2019, 11:34am |
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LocationKiwi in Ohio Posts373 Posts Per Day 0.13 |
Thanks Matthew.... |
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'What we do in the Shadows.' |
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Busy Little Bee |
Posted: December 24th, 2019, 11:54am |
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LocationLos Angeles Posts324 Posts Per Day 0.05 |
Great thread, lol. Congrats on the pickup.
BLB |
| Commodus: But the Emperor Claudius knew that they were up to something. He knew they were busy little bees. And one night he sat down with one of them and he looked at her and he said, "Tell me what you have been doing, busy little bee..." |
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Kirsten |
Posted: December 26th, 2019, 9:00am |
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LocationKiwi in Ohio Posts373 Posts Per Day 0.13 |
Hi BLB, Yeah, I got scared away, I wasn't planning on all the conflict lol... I wish I could have chimed back in earlier, but I was dealing with some personal stuff and didn't have my head in the right place to respond properly lol... And thanks for the congrats.... I finally got the new draft of this up. |
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Kirsten |
Posted: January 14th, 2020, 10:24pm |
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LocationKiwi in Ohio Posts373 Posts Per Day 0.13 |
This got picked up again.... I think the last guy has ditched it.... emailed him bout a month ago and haven't heard back... |
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Zack |
Posted: January 15th, 2020, 12:04pm |
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LocationErlanger, KY Posts4487 Posts Per Day 0.69 |
I think the last guy has ditched it.... emailed him bout a month ago and haven't heard back... |
Bummer. But I guess that's just part of the game. Hopefully this actually gets picked up. Good luck, Kirsten. |
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Kirsten |
Posted: January 15th, 2020, 1:35pm |
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LocationKiwi in Ohio Posts373 Posts Per Day 0.13 |
Thanks Zack, this new director has plans to incorporate this into a feature of short horrors, so sounds like it's a goer...😁. |
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Yuvraj |
Posted: May 20th, 2020, 7:14am |
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LocationWhy you wanna know? Posts779 Posts Per Day 0.50 |
Hi, Kirsten,
Read this one a while ago, so had to look around a bit in the forum to find it.
I really liked the silent intrusion and the payoff at the end for the Young Man's playing around.
I also think that a slightly different version of the story floats around on the internet as creepypasta( I guess). But even then, transforming it into your own script is a victory in itself.
Few problems( mainly with the sluglines) and a minor continuity error spotted. But I'm sure they already have been addressed.
One more thing, was it written in MS word? Just curious to know.
Also, congrats for the script been picked (again). How's the development? |
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Kirsten |
Posted: June 2nd, 2020, 6:33am |
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LocationKiwi in Ohio Posts373 Posts Per Day 0.13 |
Hey Yuvraj, sorry I didn't see this until just now! Thanks heaps for taking a look.. I'm curious to see what the creepy pasta short is... I had no idea about that one lol.... Anyways the producer said everything is ready to go they are just waiting for things to open up.... the script had an extended re write, to fit into the horror anthology. It's one of four shorts. The producer is new but he's working on a werewolf feature with Kane Hodder, who's been in a few slasher horrors and has played Jason in the friday the 13th parts 7 to 10. The writer that worked on the Camper script is a director/producer/screenwriter who's written a tone of B slasher/comedy films and dramas etc. His name is Rolf Kanefsky. if you have seen Scream, apparently people think that is a rip off of Rolfs first feature film in 1991 called 'there's something out there'. It's a comedy/horror.
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Kirsten |
Posted: October 5th, 2020, 12:09am |
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Warren |
Posted: October 5th, 2020, 6:05pm |
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Of The Ancients A man who has taught his mind to misbehave
LocationSydney, Australia Posts3897 Posts Per Day 1.36 |
Wow, that's awesome, congrats!! |
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Kirsten |
Posted: October 7th, 2020, 4:43am |
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LocationKiwi in Ohio Posts373 Posts Per Day 0.13 |
Thanks Warren! Hows your comic sales coming along? |
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