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Posted: July 1st, 2017, 12:42pm Report to Moderator
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W.H.O. by Christopher Singh - Short, Sci Fi, Fantasy - Story of Doctor Who's origins, parents and his early childhood. 12 pages - pdf, format

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Problems right away


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INT: IN A SPACE SHIP ABOVE EARTH

Out of a window in-between the darkness of space is a
beautiful blue planet with a few black patches covering it,
a loud "BANG!" is heard and a woman is immediately seen
being thrown across the room.

ANASTASIA
what the hell was that! Computer,
did something just hit us?


- You must into your characters before using them in dialogue.

- Sentences start with a capital letter - tons of places throughout with this issue


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I liked the old Doctor Who show, where he (or she?) was not the focus, it was the world that he lived in.  


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You haven't seen the first episode of Doctor Who Christopher unless you're attempting a full reboot. This contradicts a lot of the canon. The TARDIS was not a blue box before the Doctor entered it, it got stuck that way as the series begins.  Didn't like the humansing of the Doctor in the story,  I prefer when he is 'the other', 'the unknown'. They have tried to that to death in the new series which makes it lose something I think.


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And what was it with the W.H.O World Health Organization thing?


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