Thanks for replying, Alex. I thought you were going for a symbolic visual ending, I just wasn't sure. But yes, thumbs up, I like the visual and challenging ending. As I said, I read the dialog closely and it's spot on. If I remember, English is a second language to you, but you can't tell in that dialog at all. You;'re very talented, my friend, keep up the good work.

Thanks for taking the time, Dave.

Concerning the nits: yes and yes to
mentioning her exact seating accommodation and the "a" few steps ahead issue.

I merely struggle with your advice on capitalizing the statue, because in the first sentence it's just an equivalent object between others, plus I also want to have the only emphasizing on the general P.O.V. concept at this place, to prevent any ambiguities. It is the second sentence when the statue gets a bigger visual attention.

Quoted from eldave1 Okay - to the general. Overall I thought this was fucking brilliant. You had me all the way. The hypnosis (tricky stuff) was handled so well - expertly.  Really great work here.

That's an awesome compliment of you.

Quoted Text That's an awesome compliment of you.

Well deserved.

Those Infinite Wolves

(psychological horror 8p)

Hey!! only few words of the script have changed, plus the title, since having read the latest feedback.

Not sure if I asked before... it's... that I actually would want to have this script in the horror section, I made a fault with the genre here.  So when a mod got time and interest... In the end it doesn't matter though. The words are written however. Best wishes, Alexander