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SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board    One Week Challenge    Short Comedy - April '07 One Week Challenge  ›  Axeing the Zombie
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The boy who could fly
Posted: May 16th, 2007, 9:47am Report to Moderator
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This was a pretty funny script, it wasn't laugh out loud, but it was amusing throughout.

I loved the James Cameron, Micheal Bein and Arnold Schwarzenegger bit, some good lines there.

When Jake pisses on James Cameron's car thinking it was William Shatner's, that probably got the biggest laugh from me.

John was a Dick but he had some very funny lines, especially his rant at the end.

Good effort on this one.


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Late reviews are not a problem.

It definitely was all over the place.  Literally. Figuratively. Grammatically.

Thanks for the read, I appreciate it.

Dethan


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I find it interesting to see what makes people laugh.

During the lot tour I was laughing so hard my family was wondering how much I drank (none by the way, real laughs, not alcohol induced).

Funny story. Creative way to get fired and tell your sig other about it.
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Oh my, I just noticed you posted!

Thanks for the read.  I'm glad you liked it.  I think I'm better at comedy then horror.  

Dethan


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Hey, Dethan.

I liked this one...well, sort of. The idea was nice and all but the script was just too long. There were a few chuckles in there but they were spread out far apart and that hurt the script. This should be tighter, there are a couple of scenes that could use some trimming (the whole drivethrough at the various sets just takes too long).

Cheers
Rob


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