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About Nicholas Cage, I actually pictured him as Harrison while I was writing it, so that's cool you picked that up. Well, I imagined a cross between Nicholas Cage and Casey Affleck with his youthful naïveté.
"The Flux capacitor. It's what makes time travel possible."
I think I missed this script of yours - so here goes.
This was good and pretty funny. I didn't get why he was talking out loud to himself at the beginning but when you revealed his daughter at the end, everything just clicked. You did that very smoothly. There was some really good laughs in there. I really liked the ”screw you, man! I’m ain’t a rat!” line, that was really funny.
Good job here, but what the hell's up with all the CUT TOs and CONT'Ds?
Cheers Rob
Down in the hole / Jesus tries to crack a smile / Beneath another shovel load
Thanks for reading, Rob. I'm glad it worked for you. I did a heavily re-written version where Harrison flashes back(is that a verb?) to make the story more visual. I sumbmitted that to a contest and I'm thinking about uploading the new draft soon. But it's really almost a different story.
And the CUT TO's are a dead horse, Rob! Stop kicking it!
"The Flux capacitor. It's what makes time travel possible."