The Unknown by Andrew Roby and Ziggy W - Thriller - On an exploration, Joe and 6 other strangers take a trip to East Asia in order to conduct an extraordinary dig. But while traveling over the Atlantic Ocean their plane crashes on an unknown island and they must struggle to stay alive. While on the island they discover an abandoned Church. In conclusion  strange things start to happen as they stay on the island. - html, format

Please excuse the formating problems - this is only the second draft.
Once we get some feedback on this I'd like to do another draft.

Right now I'm wary of using my screenwriting software, since the computer it's on keeps crashing.

Thanks Don.
Read it everyone!! And give feedback. We worked hard on this script!

Andrew

I re-submitted this in better format everyone. (Well at least i hope) Has anyone read this yet¿?

Andrew

I cant read it in it's current format so I will wait until the new format arrives.

I'm in the middle of watching a movie right now, but I wanted to read this as I said I would long ago... and went to save it for later but your screenplay is all screwy and stuff.  It's all like cropped off at the top and it makes my eyes hurt.  Like half the words are there and half are gone.

Anyways, I hope that new format works out for you and I can read it next time.

BALTIS~

Good thoughts~

The format is the same as my other scripts. which no one had a problem reading. so it should be good

Andrew

Well I wont be reading it if it remains in it's current format.

I wouldn't say I can't read it for no reason apart from the fact I am not going to strain my eyes reading this formatted version.

The writing is all chopped up at the top of the words so until you redo it, I wont be reading it.

Cheers

i submitted a better format

Ok, nice one

I will be sure to read it when it comes up.

Okay. The new format is up and it should be better. Now read!!!!!!

Andrew

It's still in the same format.
- I'll try to send Don a html draft.

it is different. i made it easier to read (well at least for me) anyone look at this yet?

I was going to give this a read, but it'll have to wait a little longer. Suffice to say my hatred towards hackers and their buggered viruses continues to grow.

Once I get my computer cleared up I'll check this out.

I just got my computer working again -  
I just sent Don the draft I wrote on Movie Magic Screenwriter.
It's in HTML format and hopefully shall be up soon.

The grammar and dialogue has been fixed up and the script has been properly formated.