SimplyScripts Discussion Board
Blog Home - Produced Movie Script Library - TV Scripts - Unproduced Scripts - Contact - Site Map
ScriptSearch
Welcome, Guest.
It is April 24th, 2024, 5:22pm
Please login or register.
Was Portal Recent Posts Home Help Calendar Search Register Login
Please do read the guidelines that govern behavior on the discussion board. It will make for a much more pleasant experience for everyone. A word about SimplyScripts and Censorship


Produced Script Database (Updated!)

Short Script of the Day | Featured Script of the Month | Featured Short Scripts Available for Production
Submit Your Script

How do I get my film's link and banner here?
All screenplays on the simplyscripts.com and simplyscripts.net domain are copyrighted to their respective authors. All rights reserved. This screenplaymay not be used or reproduced for any purpose including educational purposes without the expressed written permission of the author.
Forum Login
Username: Create a new Account
Password:     Forgot Password

SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board    Screenwriting Discussion    The 2018 Writers' Tournament  ›  Rover One - WT Moderators: Mr. Blonde
Users Browsing Forum
No Members and 2 Guests

 Pages: « 1, 2 : All
Recommend Print
  Author    Rover One - WT  (currently 2417 views)
Stumpzian
Posted: April 3rd, 2018, 4:30pm Report to Moderator
January Project Group



Location
North Carolina
Posts
662
Posts Per Day
0.18

Quoted from ajr
I think the first slug line is incorrect - if we're on the planet then we can't be EXT. ASTEROID BELT


Since Ceres is inside the Asteroid Belt, I interpreted the slug as starting with the overall location, then moving to the specific location. I may be wrong.



Logged
Private Message Reply: 15 - 20
RJP
Posted: April 3rd, 2018, 11:55pm Report to Moderator
New


Posts
69
Posts Per Day
0.03
Good effort. The humour was a little too corny for me :p

The writing overall was pretty good though.
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 16 - 20
CameronD
Posted: April 4th, 2018, 12:46pm Report to Moderator
Been Around



Posts
542
Posts Per Day
0.14
Confused.


http://www.TheFilmBox.org Movie reviews, news, and fun!
http://www.screenplaywritenow.com Write a screenplay. Write. Now.
http://www.SchismSEO.com Separate from your competition. Affordable SEO services
http://www.MyEasyGifter.com Because nobody likes receiving gift cards
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 17 - 20
LC
Posted: April 5th, 2018, 9:07am Report to Moderator
Administrator



Location
The Great Southern Land
Posts
7625
Posts Per Day
1.34
Bit hit and miss for me.

I like the idea, but it doesn't quite land.

I'm undecided, and like the previous one I just read (set in the Space of your imagination) I'm not convinced  as to its ease of Production.

Marks for originality.


Logged
Private Message Reply: 18 - 20
DanC
Posted: April 5th, 2018, 1:16pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Killing villains since 1980!

Location
Buffalo NY
Posts
1131
Posts Per Day
0.34
This missed the Mark for me.  I didn't get the humor or the story.  Are you saying there's a dog on Ceres??  

Sorry, but I simply couldn't follow it.  2

Dan


Please read my scripts:
http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-series/m-1427564706/

I'm interested in reading animation, horror, sci fy, suspense, fantasy, and anything that is good.  I enjoy writing the same.  Looking to team with anyone!

Thanks
Dan
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 19 - 20
SAC
Posted: April 5th, 2018, 8:50pm Report to Moderator
Of The Ancients


… but some dreams do

Location
Upstate NY
Posts
3208
Posts Per Day
0.78
Writer,

Ha. I was thinking Rover was a dog just from the title. Pretty good effort.


Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 20 - 20
 Pages: « 1, 2 : All
Recommend Print

Locked Board Board Index    The 2018 Writers' Tournament  [ previous | next ] Switch to:
Was Portal Recent Posts Home Help Calendar Search Register Login

Forum Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post polls
You may not post attachments
HTML is on
Blah Code is on
Smilies are on


Powered by E-Blah Platinum 9.71B © 2001-2006