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Lunchroom, The: Season 2: ep 01 "Against the Madness" by Bruce Snyder - Comedy - Casey sees his physiatrist who is bound to find out what is causing his stomach ulcer. Rene takes Will aside and asks why he asked her out. Brian asks the rest of the group what he should do about his Cathy situation. Joel seeks revenge agaisnt a Senior who denied him the use of the bathroom. Also Casey has a run in with Mr. Parker, an strange teacher. - doc format.

Lunchroom, The: Season 2: ep 02 "The Risk" by Bruce Snyder - Comedy - Will, Joel, Casey and Reicther gather at Chris' house to play a game of Risk. Things turn bad when everyone starts to screw Casey over and Reicther wastes time by using his men to recreate famous battle scenes. Across town, Brock's mom throws May out causing a celebration between her two sons. - doc format.

Lunchroom, The: Season 2: ep 03 "I'm Up Here" by Vincent Biga - Comedy - Brian's half sister, Stacy Cifaretto, moves in with him which causes a stir among his friends. Stacy tries to get use to her sibling but Brian sees her as just another annoying person. - doc format.

Lunchroom, The: Season 2: ep 04 "Comics and Comedians" by by Alan Holman and Bruce Snyder - Comedy - Casey decides to draw a comic if the Gang were the Knights of the Round Table but has his dreams crushed by a small little dog. Will wants to become a comedian but everyone seems to think this is a bad idea. Joel and Chris have to put up with Mr. Drake, an annoying substitute teacher. Reicther assaults someone who he thinks was trying to rob him. - doc format.


Lunchroom, The: Season 2: ep 05 "Cold Blue" by Vincent Biga - Comedy - Brian decides to sneak some weapons into school so Will can use them in a movie. But what Brian doesn't know is that the local Police decide to have a surprise drug bust the same day. - doc format.

Lunchroom, The: Season 2: ep 06 "Prozac Candy" by Vincent Biga and Bruce Snyder - Comedy - Reicther finds out that Casey likes the same girl he likes. Will, Brian, Chris and Joel get addicted to a homemade candy called Yenom.  Casey is prescriped Prozac and becomes a very easy going person. - html format.

Lunchroom, The: Season 2: ep 07 "Suicidals Deserve to Die" by Bruce Snyder, Alan Holman, and Tyler Schwartz - Comedy - During study hall, Brock and Reicther have to talk to Sam, an old friend of Brock's who's suicidal and naive. During a basketball game during gym, Casey cripples a large bully. And when Will begins to have dreams about Stacy, he tries to ask her out. - html format.
Lunchroom, The: Season 2: ep 08 "Never Mind the Bollocks" by Bruce Snyder - Comedy - Will, Brian, Chris, and Stacy are going on a  trip to Washington D.C. for school so they pack up and head for the airport. While waiting, Will gets to know a girl named Meadow a little better. But before they get on Will and Chris are taken away when a airport worker believes they are terrorists. Meanwhile, back at school Reicther has a cold that is annoying Brock. So he tries to find ways to stop himself from sneezing. - html format.

Lunchroom, The: Season 2: ep 09 "Kirk's Party" by Alan Holman, Melinda Waterman, Trisha Vansickle, and Bruce Snyder - Comedy - Kirk helps Reicther out by writing a love poem for him so he can give it to a girl. Later, Kirk invites the guys to his party. Will refuses to go and tries to keep the others from going too. Chris, Reicther, and Casey end up going anyway. Brock has to go to group therapy after an outburst in Geography class. Brian tries to prove people wrong that he doesn't go outside enough. Stacy, with the help of her friend, discovers "Sex and the City." - html format.

Lunchroom, The: Season 2: ep 10 "Fast Car" by Edward Drogos - Comedy - It's a three day weekend so The Gang decide to take a road trip with Stacy driving them around. On their roadtrip, Will gets annoyed by Casey, they meet a magician, stay at a cabin, and Chris gets to know his inner 17 year old girl. Joel stays behind because he wants to find himself and unclutter his life. - html format.

Lunchroom, The: Season 2: ep 11 "Fahrenheit 7/11" by Bruce Snyder and Alan Holman - Comedy - Will finally decides to ask Meadow out, so to calm himself down he takes a handful of Prozac. This leads to problems, as he soon sees a vision of famous actor Richard Belzer. Chris visits his less then qualified doctor.
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Lunchroom, The: Season 2: ep 12 "Fooling Myself, Part 1 of 2" by Vincent Biga and Bruce Snyder - Comedy - It's Saturday, April 24. Brian and Brock are playing video games when Brian finally decides to end his  email relationship with Cathy. Stacy has her friend Marilyn over and two hang out. Reicther is being bothered by a "pest" and decides to take action.   - html format.

Lunchroom, The: Season 2: ep 13 "Trouble in Mind, part 2 of 2" by Bruce Snyder - Comedy - It's Saturday, April 24. In this Season Finale, Will plans on going to the dance but some medical problems get in the way. Also when Joel's older brother gives them a ride, the car brakes down. At the dance, Chris finds out something disturbing about a girl. And Casey gets himself locked in the janitor's closet.   - html format.



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I'm almost finished the first of the lunchroom scripts that I'm writing for Bruce.  I hope Casey's stomach's alright -- I hope it's not a major problem, because Casey's feeling well enough to draw a comic book in the episode I'm writing.
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Well, I hope your episodes are good.


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I just finished the first of my scripts for Bruce's series THE LUNCHROOM.  I'm e-mailing it to him tomorrow.  I wrote it directly after taking MANY notes from the first five episodes.  I'll write another episode after I read episodes six to eleven.  If the script I'm e-mailing to Bruce tomorrow doesn't fit in with the newer ones, he can call it a "lost episode" from season one.  (Or he could call it Episode 5.5, or something like that.).

In the episode, Casey draws a comic of the gang as if they were the Knights of the Round Table; meanwhile, Will goes through a short phase of wanting to be a stand-up comedian.
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I've now officially read every episode that's been posted, and I'm re-editing certain things in the episode I wrote.  I'm still sending it to Bruce on Monday.
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I just sent in episode 2 & 3. Alan's episode, will be number 4.

Also, I decided on a new Season format. Starting with this Season and each season afterward, their will be 13 episodes a season. So expect this Season to be over around August and having Season 3 start up in November or December.


Everything Must End...

The Final Episode of The Lunchroom
Coming Summer 2010
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So ... umm... Bruce ... Can you give us a teaser about Alan's episode?
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After being told he's funny, Will thinks that he might be a good comedian. Casey decides to draw the group as the Knights of the Round Table, only to be sidetracked by a dog. Joel and Chris have to deal with Mr. Drake, a sub who annoys them. Reicther attacks a man who he thinks is trying to rob him.

I can't say what happens to Brock (you'll see once Episode 2 is up.)


Everything Must End...

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Very good teaser!

I guess you added Reicther stuff, eh?  

I have only one concern.  Did you keep the scene where Will gets attacked?  That scene is an almost word-for-word dramatization of something that actually happenned to me when I was around his age...
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In the next few days, Episodes 2 & 3 will be posted on the site. Here's a little preview:


Episode 02 "The Risk" (written by Bruce Snyder)

Will, Chris, Joel, Reicther, and Casey decide to play Risk, but it quickly turns ugly.

Episode 03 "I'm Up Here" (written by Vincent Biga)

Brian's sister moves in with him, causes a stir among Brian's friends.


Everything Must End...

The Final Episode of The Lunchroom
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Another Preview:

Episode 04 "Comics and Comedians" (written by Alan Holman & Bruce Snyder)

Casey decides to write a comic; Will wants to become a comedian; Reicther assaults someone.

Episode 05 "Cold Blue" (written by Vincent Biga)

When the police have a surprise search of the school, they find something interesting in Brian's locker; Stacy tries to get use to the school.


Everything Must End...

The Final Episode of The Lunchroom
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I would just like to say how much i enjoyed episode 3 by Vincent Biga. Good Job Man!!
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Yo Bruce --

I see you changed things in the script in order to be truer to your characters than I was, et cetera.  You did exactly what I'd do if someone else were writing for one of my virtual shows.  With that said, I've got a lot of new respect for you -- dispite the fact that you deleted my favourite line, and my favourite scene -- and I'll happily submit more scripts for your series.

Cheers.
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Sorry about cutting out the scene and line (what were they by the way?) but I'm glad you understand why I did it. Also I think it's cool that your making more THE CREATOR episodes. That is a great series.


Everything Must End...

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I was wondering...what does everyone think is the worst episode and the Best Episode.

And don't be afraid to be honest.


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