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Don
Posted: May 1st, 2006, 8:16pm Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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Direction by Andrew Medlock (Mendoza) - Short - For 14 year old Martin, life is about getting through the war between his parents.  But when his desperate father has a plan, life might just show that the kid could have a purpose in life. 16 pages - pdf, format


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Hey Andrew, nice reading here. Well written piece from you. For my point of view well structured story and a good endding also. I loved to read it. Just one thing: go to the begin of page 15 and replace James for Martin.

Tha's it, pal!
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Mendoza
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Thanks Helio, it's my first attempt, so it's nice to have your comments.  I spotted the James/Martin mistake after I posted the script, which was really annoying!

Hope to get more shorts up soon..
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