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Posted: August 11th, 2006, 9:43pm Report to Moderator
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Bad Heat by Kenneth Dyson - Short - Four people pull up to a gang house in little Havana, Miami and it ends up in a shoot-out.  I was inspired by the song, “Rock Superstar” by Cypress Hill. 5 pages - doc, format


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Posted: August 19th, 2006, 11:46am Report to Moderator
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It seemed to me a nice song clip indeed. Very moving actions.

It had just three problems:  first long paragraphs. Divide them. Sencond, CUT TOs take them out and third there are lot of capitall letters.

Fortunatly I learnt lot of weapons names reading it!

good luck on next project
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