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Posted: November 21st, 2006, 4:40pm Report to Moderator
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she's not there by Michael Nelson (mikenel204) - Drama - The true nature of human identity, the limits of marriage¡ªthese are the issues a grocery store manager must grapple with after his wife is attacked during a robbery, goes into a coma and recovers with a complete personality change. She is even plagued by terrible hallucinations of alien-created androids inhabiting the earth. But is she really hallucinating? 120 pages - pdf, format


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Hey what's with those lines above your pages? Unless you meant them to be that way, then you have a bit of a formatting problem, and what started the problem is that you counted page (1) as the Title Page.

I didn't read your script by the way, but I scrolled through it. You also have very long blocks of dialogue and description. Break those up a little, it would make your story look more professional and would make it a better, easier read.
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